Hmm...
ya know, you're style could work, there is definately progress as far as camera angles and such, but the main thing is that you are using a slow, drawn out, random approach in your stories that just doesn't appeal on a global level. What I mean is, if I had made this, I could show my friends and we would laugh our butts off at how silly it is, but for anyone who doesn't know me or understand my sense of humor, they would think it's retarded. I would like to see you make an attempt at a more serious story though, because you do show that you have the patience to endure the entire flash process. Just my opinion.